Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 7 December 2020

12 Days Of Kiwi Christmas

 We were learning about what kiwis do for christmas and then we had to make a song (Carol,) because Team Toroa was having christmas rotations and we were curious about what kiwis do for christmas.

I found deciding what to put in our slide deck otherwise known as our song was really challenging because we had to find the right background for the slide deck.

I found writing the song easy because we just had to do a little bit of tweaks to the first slide of previous slide.

I will make the backgrounds more high quality next time or I will try my best.

Thursday, 26 November 2020

My Day Poem.

 I was making a poem towards how my day went because I thought I was getting good at making poems and another reason why is because I am trying to make it to twenty-five posts because I had made the badge along with some other students.

I enjoyed finding peaceful drawings of the sunset, ect because I was not in a rush because I am at my own home making this post and I wrote the poem at home.

I found not that much things hard because I had practised poems and stems.

I found everything easy because I was in no rush and loved writing and designing my poem.

One Moment In Time.

We were learning about how to write about a single moment in time because we found an interesting video about a hawk hunting a squirrel and we thought we could write about it.

I enjoyed making a long rhyming poem about the chase because there were alot of memes that were related to the video.

I found finding a png image for the squirrel and hawk quite challenging because not that many images were the ones the I liked but I ended up get two good photos for my presentation.

I found easy making the poem rhyme because of my previous post on my blog.

Monday, 23 November 2020

What Does X-mas Mean To Me?

 I was learning to write a top 10 worthy piece of writing for competitions or future references.

I found easy polylining some things in my first slide and finding a background.

I found challenging making the writing rhyme

Next time I will make my poem more longer.

Wednesday, 11 November 2020

Guy Fawkes Acrostic Poem

 We were learning about how to create Acrostic poems about Guy Fawkes or something that relates to the fiery lights that blast into the air, the reason we done this is because it had just been past a celebration and we wanted to have fun!

I had fun trying my hardest to make the poem rhyme but in ended in me just rhyming two lines in a row and also loved our teachers pulling out sparklers to give us an idea if we didn't celebrate Guy Fawkes.

It was also very hard to find out what was the portrait width and length and deciding what word should I use.

I realized that it was much easier to fit the font and size to the appropriate size to fit the page.

I will try my best on improving my rhyming skills so my poem will sound more interesting.

Wednesday, 28 October 2020

Deep Fakes And Phishing

We were learning about scams or social engineering because when we grow up we will know how to avoid scams for our personal information.

I found it easy to make up a story to try trick others into thinking that I went on a family holiday for a picnic.

I found it challenging to shade myself into the picture and get myself a shadow because I had very limited tools.

I enjoyed posing for the picture

Friday, 23 October 2020

Maori Colors And Shapes

 I was learning about the colors in maori because Mrs Barker wants to refresh our brain of maori knowledge.

I found it easy to create my character using polyline because I used the camera to look at my face.

I found it hard to memorise the colors because I have not heard the maori colors in years.

Next time I will get my mahi done quickly because I was meant to finish a long time ago

Monday, 19 October 2020

Recount Ideas.

Reminding What Makes A Good Recount Because There Is A Upcoming Writing Sample In Week 4.

I Found It Easy To Write My And Zane's Ideas On To The Blog Sheet.

I Found It Hard To Get The Ideas Because Whenever I Need A Specific Piece of Knowledge I Can't Seem To Find The Piece.

Next Time I Will Make Sure I Remember So Many Things That I Can't Decide Which One To Use.

Zane and Devan's 10 Things That Make A Good Recount. 

  • Descriptive Language
  • Editing In Red.
  • Past Tense.
  • Onomatopoeia
  • Rich Paragraphs NOT The Length
  • Painting A Picture In The Reader's Mind
  • Make The Reader Feel Like He or She is In The Story
  • Something That Hook Them Into Reading The Story 
  • Exciting Words
  • All Senses

Thursday, 24 September 2020

Is The Environment Our Responilblilty?

We were learning about persuasive writing I was really interested in the topic we were writing about because their were a lot of opinions on the topic (Is The Environment Our Responsibility?)

The digital learning object i've chosen to create a google slide because it is a lot more easier to put each paragraph into a individual  slide.

I enjoyed this learning because it was a interesting topic.

one thing I would like to learn next about the total of rubbish in the world is.

A question I still have to learn about is how was plastic first made?

Tuesday, 18 August 2020

Favorite Time Of Day

 We were learning about poems and short but detailed writing.

I found it easy to find the images and background color

I found it challenging to make some of the words rhyme.

Next time I will try detail the words a bit more.

Monday, 17 August 2020

Wild Lab Adventure.

We were learning about pollution because water is very important.

I found it easy to plan in my google doc.

I found it challenging to catch mayfly in the river because they were very rare.

Next time I will use the more specific language.


Wednesday, 24 June 2020

Matariki Report.


We were learning about Matariki and the structure of a report.
I found it easy to transport my report into a slide.
I found it challenging to get enough research for my report.
Next time I will get more information.

Monday, 2 September 2019

My Animation.

My class and I have been learning to make animations,
My animation is about Jeff Vegeta, Gogeta and goku and they fight,
I found it challenging because we did not have that much time to do it

Tuesday, 13 August 2019

Winter magetic poetry

I have been learning to creating winter poetry,
I enjoyed
I found               challenging


Friday, 7 December 2018

The time I met cable the puppy

The time I met cable the puppy
1.getting the omega.
2.getting cable.
3.naming cable.

Oh my gosh! I yelled with excitement MUM I shouted
we got the omega yes my mum whispered suddenly my step dad
popped out of nowhere and said…

met patch he said AWWWW my sister shouted with glee it so
small and fluff it's eyes are small as a rock we
were scared of holding him we could him lil pup then.The next day lil pup come
here lets play I grabbed his toy and started to play he bit me ouch! He is as naughty
as a monkey cloud came and started to play and when lil pup standard cloud came
and pushed him over on the floor.

Good morning Mum and Jahvan did you have a good sleep last
night yes son son get ready now Dev Dev ok we got
ready like the speed
of light and zooming to place to place it was like in my dream
when I was the speed of light and when you tried to see me I
looked like a blur everywhere.

Thursday, 1 November 2018

The Scary Story

The scary story [PG] NOT TRUE

1 sister asking if me and my cousin if she can tell us a story.
2 the spooky story.
3 going to sleep spooked.
“Dev! Wi! Do you want to hear a story?” my sister shouted. So they sprinted to us and started the story.
“Once upon a time there was a girl she got border and border. Until she went outside and she saw a doll shop. She brought one of the dolls the man that sold the dolls he said there's something special about this doll. Never cut its fingers off and paint them purple (one day later.) The girl got super bored and she did exactly what the man told her not to do. Two days passed by. She went on a taxi the car wasn't moving. The driver had his head on the steering wheel with a knife in his back she biked to her nans. And her Nan offered a salad. It was taking ages and so she took a look and her eyeballs were in the salad

Friday, 19 October 2018

Holidays in Auckland

         Holidays in Auckland.

           1 Getting picked up.
         2 Getting a PS4.
         3Going to Auckland.
              “Devan!”my mum shouted out loud “coming mum” I replied I zoomed          
             to my mum and…”Boo” my Dad said out loud “ahhh!” I shouted at the   top of my lungs my Dad lifted me up and swung me around Tamia my sister             sprinted to Dad and tackled him.

“Dev” do you still                       “Dev do you still want the PS4”. “hell yeah” I said back at him so we drove to Harvey Norman and my dad said. “ Um excuse me do you have any PS4 pros in stock. “ the worker replied”sorry but no” so we said thank you and left “the next stop EB Games “. So we drove all the way to EB Games and asked the same question “um excuse me, do you have any PS4 pros in stock. “ The man said yes I do come” and he asked what colour”black or white”. We choose black we brought it and left .

We started to drive to Auckland in my dad's car.We left we stopped at a bakery to get some food and we went to get some gas and then we left to Auckland. My sister got a little bit sick. and we didn't have any plastic bags so we stopped at a river and we skimmed rocks with my uncle, his name is troy. He fell into the river…”Yay!” I shouted with excitement and glee we zoomed all the way to Hillsborough and then...We got there and my sister was excited. but she was afraid of a big German shepherd.So my dad goes out first and he opens the door. “Ahhhhhh!” we yelled when we were running to the door we quickly went up the steps and trying to open the door I yelled “Dad!”

Tuesday, 19 June 2018

why I love my mum



Dear mum
Happy mothers day
I love you mum more than thousand stars
Whenever I am sad you came and stood right by
Me when i'm naughty you always came back
And said sorry so i'm here just in your heart
So i want to make it up to you by saying this to you
Roses are red violets are blue nothing is more prettier than you

Love you mum and love whanau#Devvy and room 1 LOVE YOU MUM!

Tuesday, 15 May 2018

Adventure week

do you think we will do I whispered? I“don't know...I sighed and sat down on the gold soft sand, MisWallis shouted buddy up.”I yelled Rylan I suddenly saw him in the corner of my eye, BOO! I leaped high up in the air, I landed on the soft sand then I looked down and my,
 Big enormes  feet  were covered in sand”.
Miss Wallis shouted  GO! We sprinted as fast as we can and claimed our territory and started building our city we both started on 2 the bridge and I left Rylan to do the bridge I started the mud tower “2 more minutes Miss Wallis yelled at the top of her lungs”me and Rylan started to sweat “stop! Miss Wallis shouted as loud as she can”.To test your marble race me and Rylan started to shiver is an 
Scared,so we made a ramp a humongous ramp.And we ran of to get some sticks for the out line
“3 more minutes Miss Wallis yelled as loud as she can...STOP! Miss wallis yelled we stopped now let's look at the marble races Keiha’s and Avatar’s stunning marble race...